Ben Brown's Flying Machine
Michael Thorp
language
(Free House Studios Ltd, Oct. 29, 2014)
When the first manned spacecraft to Mars disappears and its crew explorer vehicle crashes onto the Brown's wheat farm, what Ben discovers leads him on an adventure that he could never have imagined. He builds a flying machine and flies off to a planet in another universe where he finds himself fighting free its enslaved people, eighteen foot giants, and then to save his own planet. Ultimately, it's a story about faith and a young man's quest for love and redemption for his father's untimely death.Three excerpts from Ben Brown's Flying MachineExcerpt 1: Chapter 11: No AccidentBen glided out of the barn on his platform and passed the dimly lit farmhouse and skimmed over the wheat fields towards Maryannâs house.He approached her bedroom window and saw her unclipping the back of her bra. He froze, too terrified to move, and stood there watching her putting on her nightie, but as she did so, she caught sight of him and spun around indignantly and rushed up to the window.âWhat do you think youâre doing?ââNothing, I...ââNothing?ââJust wanted to say sorry âbout last night.âHer face softened.âSee if you wanted to go for a ride.âHer eyes lit up. Then she threw on a sweater, pulled some jeans up over her nightie, and approached the window, smiling excitedly.Excerpt 2: Chapter 12: 75th National High Schoolsâ Science CompetitionBen and Maryann arrived at their booth and stared at its bare concrete floor and faceless wooden frame with a cardboard sign marked â121â stapled to it. Maryann nodded towards the next booth and Ben saw the panel of four judges shaking the studentsâ hands and one of the judges looking quizzically at his platform.âLetâs hope itâs not all about presentation,â he said, lifting it down.At that, Maryann pushed the wheelbarrow away into the far corner.Moments later, the leader of the judging panel approached their booth and stared stoically at the dented platform and glanced around the empty booth at the wheelbarrow. âExactly why they need a qualifying round,â he thought to himself, intending to make an issue of it later. He looked down his list of entries and then at the other judges.â121, do you have it? I canât see it,â he asked one of the female judges.She looked down her list and shook her head, prompting the others to flick through their piles of registration forms. The lead judge looked around at Ben and Maryann.âRegistration?â he asked.Maryann handed him their copy, and he skimmed through it, writing down their details.âMr. Brown?ââYes, sir.ââA flying machine,â he articulated clearly, reading their form.âYes, sir.ââAny paperwork, documentation?ââNo, sir.ââCare to describe how it works?ââThrough particle displacement, sir.ââParticle displacement,â he echoed, looking at him above the rims of his glasses.âYes, sir.ââCare to elaborate?âBen hesitated and saw all the judges staring at him in wide-eyed anticipation. âSure,â he said. âIt uhm... it uses three particle vacuum drives. Each induces particle displacement around a vacuum, which provides forward and directional thrust.âSilence. Not one of the judges batted an eye lid.âI see,â the lead judge said.âItâs kind of new.â Ben smiled.The lead judge smiled and looked around a little incredulously at the others.âI can start her up and show you.ââBy all means. Itâs safe? Not going to shoot off anywhere?ââNo, sir. But it might pay to step back a bit.âExcerpt 3. Chapter 12: 75th National High Schoolsâ Science CompetitionA shutter slid back inside the confessional box, revealing the outline of a priest.âFather, Iâm not part of this church,â Ben said, âbut I was...ââGod welcomes one and all.ââEven if youâre not sure he exists?ââOne and all. Whatâs on your mind, son?ââI was wondering about Godâs will... his hand, how far it might extend if he wanted to do something.ââNo one can presume the infinite power and wisdom of God.ââHe could use someone of little faith?"